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| Submission declined on 9 April 2024 by Velella (talk). This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia. Declined by Velella 5 months ago. | |
| Submission declined on 4 April 2024 by Theroadislong (talk). This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject. Declined by Theroadislong 5 months ago. | |
Comment: Doesn't appear to meet WP:NACADEMIC. Don't overpopulate the details of the draft. Gives us the key points with a reliable citation. Safari ScribeEdits! Talk! 05:29, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: still a large amount of unsourced content Theroadislong (talk) 19:03, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: While there are many references, some paragraphs and sections have none at all. I have added citation needed tags in a few places where I felt statements needed to be supported by a reference. Mgp28 (talk) 16:45, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Please don't add external links to the body of the draft, we don't use them. Theroadislong (talk) 16:46, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Content like " Moreover, he learned at an early age that one must work hard to achieve one’s goals and dreams" is absolutely not appropriate for an encyclopaedia, just the dry neutral facts are all that is required, with no embellishment. Theroadislong (talk) 17:34, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Linkedin.com and blogs are not considered reliable independent sources and we don't us external links in the body of an article. Theroadislong (talk) 15:31, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: I am sure that he probably is notable but just not on the evidence provided here. The firts two sources are supposed to confirm that he is "Head of Bacterial Vaccines at Johnson & Johnson" which they do not. In the leded it is claimed that "is a developer and serial inventor of bacterial vaccines." but I struggle to find sources here which say that. Clearly a prolific and senior scientist who probably deserves a place here but the claims need to be matched by the sources which need to be much wider than links to papers he has co-written. It would also help enormously if the references were formatted per Wikipedia's referencing conventiosn so that they can be read by a clickable link. Velella Velella Talk 16:15, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: ® is not required anywhere. Non neutral tone includes "successful developer" "successfully" "an expert R&D team from scratch and successfully developed" "a prolific inventor" Theroadislong (talk) 17:26, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: What is repeated mentions of "[brontekst bewerken]" about? Theroadislong (talk) 17:21, 5 April 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: looks like it has been copied and pasted from somewhere? Theroadislong (talk) 20:10, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
Jan T. Poolman (born 16 June 1951 in Broek op Waterland, the Netherlands) is a Dutch microbiologist and bacterial vaccinologist, working on research and development (R&D) of bacterial vaccines...[1][2][3][4] He is Head & Vice President of Bacterial Vaccines at Johnson & Johnson in Leiden, the Netherlands, since 2011. Previously, in the period from 1997 to 2011, Poolman worked as Head & Vice President of Bacterial Vaccines R&D at GlaxoSmithkline (GSK), where he and his team contributed to the development and licensure of eight pediatric vaccines against the major bacterial pathogens Haemophilus influenzae type B (Hib), pertussis (Bordetella pertussis), meningococcus (Neisseria meningitidis) and pneumococcus (Streptococcus pneumoniae). From 1986-1996, he served as Head of Bacterial Vaccine R&D at the Dutch National Institute for Public Health and the Environment (RIVM), Bilthoven, the Netherlands. Poolman started his career at the University of Amsterdam, department of Medical Microbiology and National Reference Center for Bacterial Meningitis. In 1982 he was a visiting scientist at the Universty of Washington, Seattle and University of Utah, Salt Lake City.
- ^ Poolman, Jan T. (2020-09-11). "Expanding the role of bacterial vaccines into life-course vaccination strategies and prevention of antimicrobial-resistant infections". npj Vaccines. 5 (1): 84. doi:10.1038/s41541-020-00232-0. ISSN 2059-0105. PMC 7486369. PMID 32963814.
- ^ Poolman, Jan (2018-12-02). "Building teams to create innovative new vaccines". Human Vaccines & Immunotherapeutics. 14 (12): 2808–2810. doi:10.1080/21645515.2018.1530523. ISSN 2164-5515. PMC 6351015. PMID 30346885.
- ^ "Dr Jan T. Poolman". TBVI. Retrieved 2024-04-12.
- ^ AMR Listening Sessions | Panel 2: Innovations in Prevention & Diagnostics. Retrieved 2024-04-12 – via www.youtube.com. (Session with Jan Poolman: 13:08 - 26:48)