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| Submission declined on 5 October 2024 by Star Mississippi (talk). This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies. The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you. Declined by Star Mississippi 14 days ago. | |
Comment: Thanks for following the feedback and removing unreliable sources, but since you haven't added new citations, parts of the draft are now unsourced. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 09:16, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Social media and IMDB are not usable for a BLP Star Mississippi 02:39, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
Jonathan Marc Feldman is an American playwright, screenwriter, and novelist. As a screenwriter he has sold and been commissioned to write screenplays for a variety of independents and every major studio. He has written scripts for Tom Hanks, Edward Zwick, Barry Levinson, Michael Douglas, Sydney Pollack, Kennedy-Marshal, Merchant-Ivory, Mark Gordon, Pierce Brosnan and Donald Rosenfeld among others. He has written pilots for Brillstein Grey, Sony, ABC and HBO.[1]