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Comment: I can see you've trimmed quite a lot, but there's more to take out. I suggested basing the format on an existing scientist biography - which one did you pick, because it doesn't look like it to me. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 21:42, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Needs significant editing for tone so that it is written in Wikipedia's voice rather than something you'd see in a LinkedIn profile.Also, trim a lot of the detail on fundraising, projects and publications. Read MOS:BIO and take a look at other science biographies to see what Wikipedia's style is. Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 16:42, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
Kim Cornish (born 18 October 1966) is a British developmental cognitive neuroscientist recognized for her pioneering research in neurodevelopmental disorders, particularly those affecting children with attention deficits and cognitive challenges. Born in Bury, Greater Manchester, England, Cornish has committed her career to enhancing mental health and cognitive outcomes for vulnerable children through innovative, evidence-based interventions.[1]As the Founding Director of the Turner Institute for Brain and Mental Health at Monash University in Australia, she has played a pivotal role in developing digital solutions aimed at fostering resilience and learning among children facing developmental challenges. Her research has garnered international recognition, leading interdisciplinary initiatives across the United Kingdom, Canada, and Australia, and resulting in over AUD 17 million in competitive grants and philanthropic funding.[2]Cornish’s work in bridging scientific research with practical applications has significantly contributed to psychology and education. She is a Fellow of the Academy of the Social Sciences in Australia and was named the Sir John Monash Distinguished Professor in 2021.[3][4]
- ^ UCL (2019-08-12). "Centre for Developmental Cognitive Neuroscience". University College London. Retrieved 2024-10-14.
- ^ "Turner Institute for Brain and Mental Health". Monash University.
- ^ "Sir John Monash Distinguished Professors". Monash University.
- ^ "Academy of the Social Sciences in Australia". Academy of the Social Sciences in Australia. Retrieved 2024-10-14.