Draft:Miyuki Tani

Miyuki Tani
Miyuki Tani
Origin	Japan・Takarazuka, Hyogo, Japan
Genres	Blues; Rock 'n' Roll; Pop; Funk; Pop; Country; EDM; Hip Hop;
Occupations	Drummer; Rhythm Coach; Sound artist; Arranger; Urban Planner; Social Entrepreneur;
Instruments	Drums; Guitar; Synthesizer; Bass;
Years active	2008–present

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Declined by Netherzone 14 days ago. Last edited 0 seconds ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: Improperly sourced draft, that reads promotionally, for example, "exceptional, famous, inspired by, leading, more than, renowned, showcased, worldwide". Draft needs to be cleaned up to read with an encyclopedic tone, sourcing needs to be improved to confirm notability. Netherzone (talk) 18:02, 10 October 2024 (UTC)

Miyuki Tani is a Japanese Drummer, rhythm coach, Arranger, Sound artist, Urban planner, and Social entrepreneur based in the United States. She has performed with Magic Slim^[1] , a Grammy-nominated blues artist, and was part of Curtis King’s"Curtis King".^[2] world tour. In addition to her performances, Miyuki Tani has worked as a rhythm coach and arranger, collaborating with artists from around the world.^[3]

[:1-1] "Teardrops for Magic Slim LIVE at Rosa's Lounge *2023 GRAMMY AWARD NOMINEE!". johnprimerblues.com. Retrieved 2024-10-05.

[:2-2] "Curtis King collaboration with Indian-American musician Anand Bhatt, Mi Corazon Insiste, was nominated for the Latin GRAMMY Award".

[:4-3] "Miyuki is a drummer for Grammy-recognized MUSICIAN with over 20 years of experience in blues/jazz/rock'n'roll music, with a passion for social business".

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