Draft:Tal Patalon

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Submission declined on 19 September 2024 by OhHaiMark (talk). This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject. If you would like to continue working on the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window. If you have not resolved the issues listed above, your draft will be declined again and potentially deleted. If you need extra help, please ask us a question at the AfC Help Desk or get live help from experienced editors. Please do not remove reviewer comments or this notice until the submission is accepted. Where to get help If you need help editing or submitting your draft, please ask us a question at the AfC Help Desk or get live help from experienced editors. These venues are only for help with editing and the submission process, not to get reviews. If you need feedback on your draft, or if the review is taking a lot of time, you can try asking for help on the talk page of a relevant WikiProject. Some WikiProjects are more active than others so a speedy reply is not guaranteed. How to improve a draft Wikipedia:Contributing to Wikipedia – a basic overview on how to edit Wikipedia. Help:Wikitext – how to use the markup Help:Referencing for beginners – how to include references Wikipedia:Article development – how to develop your article Wikipedia:Writing better articles – how to improve your article Wikipedia:Verifiability – make sure your article includes reliable third-party sources You can also browse Wikipedia:Featured articles and Wikipedia:Good articles to find examples of Wikipedia's best writing on topics similar to your proposed article. Improving your odds of a speedy review To improve your odds of a faster review, tag your draft with relevant WikiProject tags using the button below. This will let reviewers know a new draft has been submitted in their area of interest. For instance, if you wrote about a female astronomer, you would want to add the Biography, Astronomy, and Women scientists tags. Add tags to your draft Editor resources Easy tools: Citation bot (help) | Advanced: Fix bare URLs Declined by OhHaiMark 34 days ago. Last edited 0 seconds ago. Reviewer: Inform author. This draft has been resubmitted and is currently awaiting re-review.

• Comment: User:Tavantius Many thanks for all the comments, I greatly appreciate them. I have now gone through the article and removed all that might be construed as promotional. I have also deleted buzzwords. I would be most grateful if you would review the current version of the article and approve it for publication. Many thanks!
  Thank you very much - Ovedc (talk) 09:14, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

• Comment: It's still in a promotional tone. Please remove any terms that would be considered as buzzwords here. Tavantius (talk) 09:13, 24 September 2024 (UTC)

• Comment: Thank you, OhHaiMark for your guidance! I trim out all the primary sources for secondary sources instead. Please, can you re-check the article for publishing?
  
  Many thanks - Ovedc (talk) 03:49, 24 September 2024 (UTC)
  :Tagging User:Tavantius - Many thanks - Ovedc (talk) 03:58, 24 September 2024 (UTC)

• Comment: Please trim out some of the primary sources for secondary sources instead. OhHaiMark (talk) 13:06, 19 September 2024 (UTC)

• Comment: To the reviewer: This article is a sentence-by-sentence translation from the Hebrew article, with added sources. It is about one of the known academic medical researchers in Israel.
  
  This article comply with the specific notability guideline for academics (WP:PROF):
  1) Criterion 1 is to show that the academic has been an author of highly cited academic work - citations need to occur in peer-reviewed scholarly publications such as journals or academic books.
  
  2) The person's research has had a significant impact in their scholarly discipline, broadly construed, as demonstrated by independent reliable sources
  
  Thanks - Ovedc (talk) 09:40, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Tal Patalon
טל פטלון‎
Tal Patalon
Born	19 May 1974 (1974-05-19) (age 50) Tel Aviv, Israel
Citizenship	Israel
Education	Doctor of Medicine (M.D), Semmelweis University in Budapest, Hungary. Specialist degrees in family medicine and emergency medicine, along with certification in palliative medicine, Tel Aviv University LL.B. from Ono Academic College
Known for	Head of the Research and Innovation Center (KSM - Kahn Sagol Maccabi) at Maccabi Healthcare Services

Tal Tova Patalon (born May 19, 1974) is an Israeli doctor and researcher, She is Head of the Kahn Sagol Maccabi Research and Innovation Center (KSM) at Maccabi Healthcare Services, and the Founder of Medāna, a global health AI company.^[1]

In 2024, Nature Magazine chose to feature Patalon as one of four changemakers to health challenges through big-data analytics and AI. ^[2]

Since 2022, Patalon hosts A Matter of Life and Death, ^[3][4] a podcast in which she conducts in-depth conversations with doctors, researchers, and others in the field of science, ^{[5][6] [7]} technology,^[8] economics, finance, artificial intelligence, ^[9] research, and media.