Draft:Voltol

Submission declined on 15 November 2024 by DoubleGrazing (talk).

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Declined by DoubleGrazing 4 days ago. Last edited 0 seconds ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: This appears to be a translation from de.wiki [1], in which case that article must be attributed as the source, per WP:HOWTRANS.
You must also correctly translate all the templates etc., as some of these are still in German, and don't therefore function correctly here on en.wiki. DoubleGrazing (talk) 11:05, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

Comment: The style of referencing is quite confusing, please see WP:REFB for advice.
Much of the content is unreferenced.
All but one of the citations are to a single source (Schulze).
Ref #2 doesn't seem to work. DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:58, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

Voltol is an oil mixture of rapeseed and mineral oil with reduced viscosity and lower pour point. The product is produced by electrical cracking with an electric field below alternating voltage. It is used as lubricating oil mainly for aircraft and carengines and as hydraulic oil. It is sold in Germany and English-speaking countries under the trade name Voltol-Gleitöl and in Belgium as Elektrion lubricating oil.