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| Submission declined on 25 September 2023 by 331dot (talk). This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies. Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at Microsoft Windows instead. Declined by 331dot 12 months ago. | |
Comment: I agree with the previous comment that all this article does is describe the features of the service and not actually factually describe the subject from a neutral POV. Further, I don't think this addresses the concerns raised by Talk:Microsoft Windows/Archive 5 § Proposed merge of Windows 365 into Microsoft Windows#Windows 365. Inappropriate use of WP:External links, instructional wording like A Windows 365 Cloud PC can be accessed by signing into the Windows 365 web portal at windows365.microsoft.comwith your account which is licensed to use the service. [sic] Let's leave product description pages to the company that provides the content and not worry about promoting it on the project. microbiologyMarcus (petri dish·growths) 21:37, 8 February 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: This draft is for a title that was previously an article, but was then cut down to a redirect. If this draft is accepted, the history should be preserved. Do not tag the redirect for G6. Reviewers should check the history and verify whether there was a consensus to cut the article down to a redirect, or whether the action was taken boldly without discussion. If there was a consensus for the cutdown, do not accept this draft without verifying that the draft improves the article or that consensus has changed. If in doubt, please discuss. Robert McClenon (talk) 07:19, 5 January 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: You've done a nice job describing the features of this software/service, but I see little significant coverage in independent reliable sources about this topic in particular to merit a standalone article. I would suggest that you start a talk page discussion at Talk:Microsoft Windows about the merits of either expanding that article or having a standalone article about this topic. 331dot (talk) 08:37, 25 September 2023 (UTC)
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Windows 365[1][2][3] is a subscription-based cloud PC service created by Microsoft that became available to businesses on August 2nd, 2021[4]. The service can either be accessed through the Windows 365 app, Microsoft Remote Desktop app or through the Internet.
The Windows 365 service[5] is based upon Azure Virtual Desktop (AVD), in which Microsoft controls and manages the infrastructure. Windows 365 is Software as a Service whereas Azure Virtual Desktop is to be considered to be a Platform as a Service.[6]
Windows 365 offers a persistent and dedicated Cloud PC to the end-user, which can easily be accessed from anywhere.
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