Talk:Alan Yu (chef)

hi, I received the following comments but I have edited accordingly: This article contains weasel words: vague phrasing that often accompanies biased or unverifiable information. (February 2018) The topic of this article may not meet Wikipedia's notability guideline for biographies. (February 2018) This article has an unclear citation style. (February 2018) Please advise if I still need to improve? Thank you.— Preceding unsigned comment added by AshleyLau (talkcontribs)

@AshleyLau: Descriptive embellishments like "illustrious" and "lifelong passion" need to be removed. You list references, but it is not clear what the references are referencing. Please review WP:CITE for information on how to properly cite sources within the article. At least one of the references comes up as not found. Please also review WP:BIO for the notability guidelines. 331dot (talk) 09:04, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
This page also should be moved to a new title without Mr. Yu's occupation or title in it(just "Alan Yu") per standard policy. I can do that if you wish. 331dot (talk) 09:06, 19 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]