Talk:All Women's Action Society

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This is where I need to see your possible topics, outline and bibliography.Ingrid.bego (talk) 14:40, 4 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I think that you are off to a very good start with this article. It seems to be structured very well and makes good use of media. You provide good sources throughout your article. The "Campaigns" section appears to be unfinished, which I am sure that you are aware of and will eventually fix. Great job! Zdaniels1478 (talk) 18:29, 15 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I agree with the review above. I think you have done a good job. Make sure your intro is a clear summary of the most important parts of the article. For a short article, your lead may only be a few sentences. It isn’t meant to catch the reader’s attention, or explain why the topic is important. Instead, it’s a quick summary of the article in plain language. I love the image but right now is flagged because you do not have permission to use it. I would give it a shot and email the organization to see if they would give you permission. I think it would be awesome. As the reviewer above noted, there are still parts of the article that are not completed. However, the sections are laid out very well. Good job. Ingrid.bego (talk) 04:08, 21 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your Wikipedia article is well put together and the sources seem solid, but I'd be interested in seeing some more details added to the sections to give some more background on the organization and what they are about. What kind of impact have they had on the Malaysian society? What kind of differences have they made thus far? I love the way your article is structured, though, and find it easy to look through your information. Awesome job. Simsimmy (talk) 18:05, 1 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]