Talk:Commander Keen in Goodbye, Galaxy

Good articleCommander Keen in Goodbye, Galaxy has been listed as one of the Video games good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
August 24, 2016Good article nomineeListed
November 23, 2016Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 14:07, 23 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]


  • Images are all fine.
  • There's a couple of duplicate images. Keen Dreams in the first paragraph of Development; the Commander Keen series in the second paragraph of reception, and Wolfenstein 3D in the first paragraph of Legacy
  • Lead: Could do with a brief mention of the reception.
  • Development: "which was missing in prior Keen games" - best to change this to something like "which was not included in prior Keen games" as otherwise it reads as if music was accidently left out of previous games and then that music was added this time one. I presume that isn't what happened.
  • "and schedule Aliens Ate My Babysitter" - comma after schedule
  • "the fifth episode, however, was created within one month" - perhaps better as "the fifth episode, which was created within a month of it"
  • Reception: Link Super Mario Bros.