Talk:Common prosperity

The article mentions "Uniform egalitarianism", which is not a commonly used term. I couldn’t find any specific information about it, I am wondering if there may be some defect in translation. I undersand that Egalitarianism is a school of thought within political philosophy that prioritizes social equality for all people. So I'm confused by this statement:

> Under the leadership of CCP general secretary Xi Jinping, the term gained large-scale prominence, with Xi defining common prosperity as more equal distribution of income, but also saying that it is not uniform egalitarianism. Burt Harris (talk) 23:14, 5 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Passed. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:50, 8 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: AirshipJungleman29 (talk · contribs) 12:40, 2 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this review. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:40, 2 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
  2. Is it verifiable with no original research?
    A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
    B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
    C. It contains no original research:
    See spotcheck below
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
    Earwig shows 64%, but that's due to long quotes, so it's fine.
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagZhejiang Pilot Zoneged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

I will get to this review in the next week. If you have time, please consider reviewing an article at WP:GAN. I will be using this review in the WikiCup. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:40, 2 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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Random source spotcheck
  1. 12 good
  2. 24 good
  3. 35 good
  4. 47 good
  5. 48 good
Notes
  • All quotes need to be referenced with inline citations.
 Done. The Account 2 (talk) 13:53, 8 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • The list in the Zhejiang Pilot Zone section would be much better served in a table per MOS:EMBED.
 Done. The Account 2 (talk) 13:53, 8 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • No need for tenses like "has [verb]" when talking about Xi, just use the past tense, otherwise it'll become weird in a few years. i.e. "The term has seen a large revival" --> "The term saw a large revival", "It has also been speculated" --> "It was also speculated" etc.
 Done. The Account 2 (talk) 13:53, 8 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]


Thanks a lot! The Account 2 (talk) 13:53, 8 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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