Talk:Dave Sharma

Dave Sharma has been listed as one of the Social sciences and society good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: April 11, 2016. (Reviewed version).

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This article has been mentioned by a media organization: Myriam Robin (July 18, 2021). "Dave Sharma wrangles Wikipedia". Australian Financial Review. Retrieved July 24, 2021. Dave Sharma, the Liberal member for Wentworth, has for the past few days been fixing his Wikipedia page. ... But the weird thing about the contributions of the former ambassador to Israel is that he's been making them entirely by the book.

A fact from Dave Sharma appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 27 November 2013 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows: Did you know... that, at age thirty-seven, Dave Sharma is the youngest person to be appointed as an Australian Ambassador? A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2013/November. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Dave Sharma.

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Reviewer: MPJ-DK (talk · contribs) 03:41, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I will be picking up the review of this one - both for the Wiki Cup and the GA cup as well. I will be making my review comments over the next couple of days.

Side note, I would love some input on a couple of Featured List candidates, Mexican National Light Heavyweight Championship and NWA World Historic Welterweight Championship. I am not asking for Quid pro Quo, but all help is appreciated.  MPJ-US  03:41, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

• I'm not familiar with the featured list requirements at all, but I'll take a look at anything which jumps out at me. Callanecc (talk • contribs • logs) 05:49, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I like to get this checked out first, I have found issues using this that has led to quick fails so it's important this passes muster.

Peer review tool

• No issues detected Y

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• Not seeing anything that is actually a violation Y

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• No issues detected Y

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• No issues detected Y

• "Since May 2013 he has" does not need the comma
  • I think this has been done already?
• "studying medicine he began working" should have a comma after the introduction so "studying medicine, he began working"
  • Y
• "in around 1999" can be simplified to "around 1999"
  • Y
• This part confuses me " (including as the and US President Barack Obama's visit to Australia in November 2011." not as well written as the rest of the article, please reword this.
  • Y Done, oops.
• The "Africa Branch" section really does not have enough info in it to warrant it's own section, can you add some details or perhaps merge it with the previous section?
  • How's what I did? Can always merge it into another section if you think tha

• All look reliable, correct format, consistent date format etc. when there is an author they're listed etc. It's all good Y

• It's a pretty short article, 606 words of "written prose" (excluding info boxes etc.) but it's not so short I would automatically fail it for not being broad enough.
• Since the criteria is "broad" and not comprehensive this is broad enough Y

• Yes, factual and straight forward Y

• Short article history, no issues jump out at me Y

• No issues detected Y

• @Callanecc: - So that's my complete review, pretty quick since it's a short article. I am going to put this on hold for 7 days to allow for improvements to be made. Let me know when you're ready for me to review again.  MPJ-US  04:47, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • @MPJ-DK: I think I've done everything you mentioned. Let me know if you notice anything else. Callanecc (talk • contribs • logs) 05:49, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
    • @Callanecc: - I am okay with everything that was addressed, looking good. I am happy to pass this for Good Artice status.  MPJ-US  20:20, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
      • Thanks MPJ-DK!! Callanecc (talk • contribs • logs) 23:38, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]