This is mostly an "about us" for the manufacturing company called edra. There are hundreds of similar pages on Wiki and we aim to keep the same format "spam-free" compatible. Please let us know what you think we should fix. -Beestudio (talk) 16:10, 11 May 2010 (UTC)--[reply]
- The first problem is it doesn't clearly define what Edra is. The lede should be along the lines of "Edra is a furniture manufacturing company based in (city), Italy."
- The second problem is that the article is not in neutral point of view. It is heavily written as promotional text and not a neutral description of the company. The Comfort section, for instance, is heavily promotional. The Edra's Story section isn't as bad, although it needs independent reliable sources for the Italian press' kudos and the placement in MOMA. —C.Fred (talk) 16:00, 11 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Good point. I will prepare more appropriate texts to avoid being too promotional. thanks for your input. -Beestudio (talk) 16:10, 11 May 2010 (UTC)--[reply]