Talk:Grey's Anatomy/Archive 3

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Reviewer: Grandiose (talk · contribs) 10:52, 5 December 2011 (UTC)

I'll be conducting a full review shortly, but there are at a minimum no reasons to "quickfail" (fairly obviously, the article is in good shape). Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 10:52, 5 December 2011 (UTC)

Issues

  • The "Awards" section needs references and grammar improvement - for example an ampersand ("&") is used in the main body.
 Doing... TRLIJC19 (talk) 02:30, 7 December 2011 (UTC)
  • I have, and am added some citation needed tags.
 Done Addressed citation needed tags. TRLIJC19 (talk) 21:31, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
I've undone one of your references which did not appear to support the sentence. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 21:34, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
 Done Removed statement as it's not clarified by a source. TRLIJC19 (talk) 23:08, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Standardise how episodes are referred to - eg. "Name" rather than Name or just Name.
Not sure I don't quite know what you mean..can you clarify? TRLIJC19 (talk) 23:04, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
Some are marked like "The Becoming" (article's quote marks, not mine), others Piece of My Heart and one just 'Freedom' (my quote marks). It is no requirement that any one style is used - although might I say I think the first is best - but it's confusing to the reader to keep changing. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 10:25, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 Done Okay thanks I got it now. TRLIJC19 (talk) 02:19, 7 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Refs #37, #57, #16, #73, #75, need improvement. #58 needs replacing - besides, it's now been aired, no?
 Done TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:37, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Preferably standardise date references between, say, 2011-05-15, 15 May 2011, etc.
 Done TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:59, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Give the full names of the key cast members where you have only the surname at the beginning of the cast and characters section (but not elsewhere unless there is a good reason - I think this is a hypercorrection from the previous GAN)
 Done TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:37, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
  • "DVRed" is not (yet) a verb and should be avoided.
 Done TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:37, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
  • "Fall" (or indeed any season name) should be avoided because it is confusing for the Southern Hemisphere.
 Done TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:37, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
  • The "Season 7" section needs rewriting now it has aired - for example tenses but also that the number of episodes can be stated as fact.
 Done TRLIJC19 (talk) 23:02, 5 December 2011 (UTC)

On hold for now, further comments will be added once these have been addressed. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 5 December 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for picking up the review! I'll address the issues ASAP. TRLIJC19 (talk) 20:58, 5 December 2011 (UTC)
OK, did some copyediting of my own, and am now happy with the article. Why not assess one yourself? Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 22:36, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
Thank you! TRLIJC19 (talk) 14:45, 11 December 2011 (UTC)