Talk:Grizzly (tobacco)

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Posted 11:45 AM on Thursday March 14th OutlaW1211 (talk) 18:45, 14 April 2011 (UTC) A lot of the descriptions in the "varieties" section are written like advertisements, and sound as if they have been taken from such. I removed the worst offender, but they need serious revision to conform to the NPOV standard. I'm not familiar with smokeless tobacco or Grizzly, else I would have. Someone who is needs to rewrite them in a way that isn't blatantly promoting the product, though. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.211.37.140 (talk) 05:49, 1 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]