Talk:Impact of culture on aviation safety

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This article has good interesting topic with reliable descriptions and examples. By reading through, I was able to understand the topic clearly. On the other hand, I also have few suggestions for this article. I think you need more detailed information on abstract paragraph so that readers can get overall knowledge of what this article is about without reading the whole page. Also, for the "past incidents" title, I think it is better to change the word type to sub-title with underline so that the article has more clear layout. And I also think you need some links to other wiki pages, so that readers can click on the link and get information when they are not clear with certain word. It is good article overall!! Dhur2 (talk) 21:06, 18 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

To improve your article, you can expand more on introduction by stating a general idea of how cultures around the world are different and in my personal opinion, I don't think you need to include "this page talks about..." in the abstract. You can change your writing style by stating the main points of the arguments at the very beginning of the paragraphs instead of describing what you are going to write about. Also, try linking your article with other articles so other people can get more knowledge about your topic. Overall it has many reliable sources and it is an interesting topic to study about! Hhur2 (talk) 21:24, 18 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]