Talk:Mamund

Right, rather than just arguing over copyedit tags, lets try and be constructive. So, here is a copyedit'd version of the page. Lets use this to agree the content of the article, and then once we've come to a solution, it can be copied to the article page.

Please amend the article I've proposed below, and leave an explanation of why/what you've done below. I shall rv any unexplained edits assuming them to be vandalism.

Text now copied to the article after sufficient time for review. Khoikhoi agreed with the version that was proposed and Hybridlily made no comments (I drew their attention to this page on their talk page, so they knew of the proposed process) so hopefully the article is now in a state ready to be further expanded. Kcordina 15:37, 24 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]