Talk:Peruvian cruiser Lima

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Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 01:24, 1 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 21:51, 8 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:51, 8 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. I look forward to your comments. simongraham (talk) 04:50, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Image properly licensed
  • Armed with two 6 in (152 mm) guns, on commissioning, the cruiser was the flagship and largest vessel in the Peruvian fleet. In 1901, the armament was upgraded. awkward
    • Reworded.
  • Link Ecuador
    • Added.
  • Does the ship have any kind of armor? If not, then she's an unprotected cruiser.
    • The sources have no detail about armor. Updated the links.
  • Fix the draught figure in the main body; the figures for length and beam don't match between the infobox and main body
    • Fixed and referenced.
  • Any idea why such a lengthy amount of time between completion and service entry?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:56, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Added a bit of explanation.

@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you for this review. Please take a look at my edits and tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 15:12, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]