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"Defined as a "dramatic adventure" game," Defined by whom?
Clarified.
"Ichiro Ogami arrive in Paris to join the newly formed Paris Assault Force and train "Paris Division", an all-female unit established by Paris' government dedicated to fighting supernatural threats against the city while maintaining their cover as a cabaret act." Is there a way to rephrase not to say "Paris" four times in one sentence? Also, that's just a VERY long sentence in general.
Done my best with this.
"—, " Just the emdash will do,l no comma, no space.
Simplified this.
What is Les Chatte Noir? I mean literally, the black cat, but I've never heard of it, nor would define Montmarte this way.
I've explained what it is further down, following the modification inspired by your above observation.
"During the adventure segments, Ogami navigates Montmartre and the Le Chatte Noir from his apartment." Presumably you mean "starting from his apartment"?
Yep. Thanks for spotting that.
" to adjust to intensity of a single answer" To adjust to intensity? Check your wording.
I meant "the". Thanks for the catch.
" Paris Division fight monsters" fights monsters.
Sorted.
Unusual place to bring in the first mention of the "Flower Division" Who are they?
It's not the first mention. They're introduced in section's first paragraph.
"raise a character's Motivation," Raises.
Corrected.
"Sakura Wars 3 opens with Imperial Army Lieutenant" Don't pipe that link, let it specify Japanese directly.
Done.
You know what, you could answer at least four of these concerns simply by moving Synopsis above Gameplay. A lot of my answers are down here.
I'm a little uncertain about this, but alright I've moved it.
"A major theme of the game was talking with people" Is, as the game still exists.