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" By July 15, Fengshen attained typhoon status, and after initially moving to the north, it began a movement toward the northwest" using the words "moving" and "movement" in the same sentence seems weird, I suggest you change " began a movement" to "turned". YEPacificHurricane18:29, 15 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"While near peak intensity, Typhoon Fengshen underwent the Fujiwhara effect with Typhoon Fung-wong," the Fujiwhara effect" seems weird here, suggest it to "a Fujiwhara interaction", but that is just my opinion. YEPacificHurricane18:29, 15 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. Took care of all of these but the Fujiwhara effect. I think it works fine as it is, but if you feel strongly about it, I can change it. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:34, 15 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]