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The result was: promoted by BorgQueen (talk) 18:12, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
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Created by DigitalIceAge (talk). Self-nominated at 21:11, 18 April 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Beep line; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- Nice article! New enough (submitted on day it was created/moved into mainspace); long enough (4360 characters); well sourced with inline citations; extremely low Earwig score and no apparent copyvio; neutral and balanced. The one source I'm not sure about is LOD/H Technical Journal as I'm unfamiliar with Wikipedia guidelines on "hacker" websites. (Maybe Legion of Doom specifically is ok if used with care?) QPQ is pending. ALT0 checks out – I wonder if it's worth adding "U.S." before telephone network in this case? Any ideas for ALT hooks? How about one with teenagers in it? (In the end, maybe ALT0/0a will be best...but thought it's worth exploring other options as it's such a great story.) Cielquiparle (talk) 04:02, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks very much for the review and kind words! I decided to remove the LOD source as I only really used it to explain the circumstances where callers might be charged for these conversations despite busy tones not supposed to invoke supervision billing. Added "U.S." to the lede and hook. Here's a couple other hooks:
- DigitalIceAge (talk) 17:04, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
- Approving ALT0, ALT1, and ALT2. Cielquiparle (talk) 20:23, 20 April 2023 (UTC)