- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:34, 22 September 2020 (UTC)
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Beulah Ream Allen
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General Douglas MacArthur presents the Medal of Freedom to Beulah Ream Allen
... that American civilian physician Beulah Ream Allen (pictured, right) received the Medal of Freedom for aiding fellow prisoners in two Japanese internment camps in the Philippines during World War II?Source: "For her selfless care of the sick and wounded, under the most trying conditions, and for her subsequent service to fellow prisoners in two concentration camps, she was awarded the Freedom Medal by General Douglas MacArthur" (The Daily Herald); "Dr. Beulah R. Allen, formerly of Berkeley, has been awarded the Medal of Freedom by the United States Army for meritorious service as a civilian physician in the Philippines during the war" (Oakland Tribune)
- ALT1: ... that American volunteer civilian physician Beulah Ream Allen (pictured, right) survived three Japanese internment camps in the Philippines during World War II? Sources: several
- Comment: I prefer ALT1 for its brevity, but if the reviewer likes the angle in ALT0 we could tweak it more.
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Improved to Good Article status by SusunW (talk). Nominated by Yoninah (talk) at 20:03, 13 September 2020 (UTC).
- QPQ
- Supplied by nominator, and has not been used as a QPQ elsewhere
- Eligibility
- Article achieved GA status September 13, 2020
- 8423 characters (1429 words) "readable prose size"
- Sourcing
- Every paragraph is sourced, often more than once
- Hook
- Hook is is 181 characters, stated in the article, and sourced
- ALT1 hook is 141 characters, stated in the article, and sourced
- Images
- Image is PD as the work of a US government employee
- Copyvio check
- Earwig's tool shows no signs of concern - one of the cleanest articles on this kind of check that I've ever seen.
I also prefer ALT1, as surviving multiple internment camps is more hooky. — Maile (talk) 20:51, 13 September 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you. I struck the first hook and also added a link to Medal of Freedom in the caption. Yoninah (talk) 21:03, 13 September 2020 (UTC)