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Edmonds Band Rotunda

... that Edmonds Band Rotunda (pictured) was deconstructed after the 2011 Christchurch earthquake and was rebuilt in 2021?

Created by Panamitsu (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 48 past nominations.

―Panamitsu (talk) 07:50, 30 August 2024 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: A bit uninteresting, but looks good. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 14:17, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

Nice article, I found the fact it was a restaurant to be quite interesting/unique, heritage buildings often get rebuilt but a rotunda serving as a restaurant paints quite an interesting thought in my mind. Traumnovelle (talk) 07:06, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
Seconding Traumnovelle, my only comment is that the hook is a bit boring. I think a more interesting one might be something like ...that the small basement of the Edmonds Band Rotunda was once used as a kitchen?. And thank you for including my photo! David Palmer//cloventt ^(talk) 20:35, 22 September 2024 (UTC)

This looks more interesting than the hook presented in the nomination. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 11:44, 23 September 2024 (UTC)

I agree that your hook is better, Cloventt. I'll write it out for the next reviewer. ALT1:

"... that the small basement of the Edmonds Band Rotunda (pictured) was once used as a kitchen?" Source: https://canterburystories.nz/exhibitions/places-christchurch-band-rotundas/thomas-edmonds-band-rotunda ―Panamitsu (talk) 06:31, 9 October 2024 (UTC)

Tagging for a second review, given Nuggeteer's topic ban. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 00:25, 9 October 2024 (UTC)
I was going to approve the new hook, but there are some issues: 1. the sentence supporting the fact lacks a footnote, 2. the source does not refer to the basement as "small", and 3. the article is in need of a copyedit for some minor grammatical errors. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 02:18, 14 October 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, Narutolovehinata5. I've added a citation to the end of the sentence supporting the hook, and have done some copyedits on the article. Here is ALT2, without the "small":

"... that the basement of the Edmonds Band Rotunda (pictured) was once used as a kitchen?"

Cheers ―Panamitsu (talk) 04:16, 20 October 2024 (UTC)