- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 18:47, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
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James Markham Ambler
James Markham Ambler
- ... that despite having an opportunity to leave the sunken USS Jeannette, James Markham Ambler (pictured) decided to stay and provide medical attention to the crew? Source: [1], [2]
- ALT1: ... that due to the efforts of James Markham Ambler (pictured), Jeannette expedition became the first arctic expedition "without a single case of scurvy"? Source: https://doi.org/10.1093%2Fanb%2F9780198606697.article.2000022
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/1995 Burlington mayoral election
- Comment: Created by Delqa on May 19. Expanded by me. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 21:20, 20 May 2022 (UTC)
Created by Delqa (talk) and Kavyansh.Singh (talk). Nominated by Kavyansh.Singh (talk) at 21:20, 20 May 2022 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. It is neutral and cites its sources. I am a little concerned about close paraphrasing from one source: [3]. Both hooks are cited within the article and are interesting to a broad audience. QPQ done. Other than the concern with paraphrasing this article is good to go. I invite a response from the nominator about the potential close paraphrasing and if the text of the article needs to be tweaked. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 16:37, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- @Trainsandotherthings: Thanks for the review. I made few changes, but most of the other paraphrasing appears to be case of WP:LIMITED, like name and titles of institutions. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 10:41, 29 May 2022 (UTC)
The article looks good to go now. Thanks for the changes. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 12:42, 29 May 2022 (UTC)
- @Kavyansh.Singh: is the "without scurvy" bit a quote or a summary? The article and the hook don't seem to agree, and I can't access the source... theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 08:18, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
- @Theleekycauldron:: Hi! Added the quotes in the article; does it work? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:16, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
- Howdy! indeed it does :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 07:02, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- @Theleekycauldron:: Hi! Added the quotes in the article; does it work? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:16, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
- @Kavyansh.Singh: is the "without scurvy" bit a quote or a summary? The article and the hook don't seem to agree, and I can't access the source... theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/they) 08:18, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
- @Trainsandotherthings: Thanks for the review. I made few changes, but most of the other paraphrasing appears to be case of WP:LIMITED, like name and titles of institutions. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 10:41, 29 May 2022 (UTC)
