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The result was: promoted by Vaticidalprophet (talk) 15:42, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
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Renai Circulation
- ... that in 2019, Chinese company Xiaomi presented their third quarterly financial report through the anime song "Renai Circulation"? Source: J-Cast (link), PC Watch (link)
Created by Lullabying (talk). Self-nominated at 04:50, 3 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Renai Circulation; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
I'll be claiming this for review as I really like Renai Circulation and Kana Hanazawa's work. I'll get back to this soon. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:15, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
- To put myself into the mood, I'm listening to Renai Circulation right now. Article meets DYK requirements and a QPQ has been provided. No close paraphrasing was found. The hook is cited inline and, while the source is in Japanese, Google Translate checks out. My concern is the hook wording: the hook claims it's Xiaomi that presented their financial report with the song, but the article and the source say it's the CEO of Xiaomi who did that. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:56, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
- I edited the article to match the hook. It is unclear as to who in Xiaomi made the song, only that they used voice clips from Lei Jun. lullabying (talk) 22:01, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
- I don't know, that still doesn't seem to match what I saw in the sources. Maybe it should be the hook itself that needs revision. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 03:00, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
- The sources do not say that, and the confusion may be because you're using Google Translate. J-Cast states, "The voice of Lei Jun (the major smartphone maker Xiaomi's CEO) himself was processed to create a parody, and it was posted it into the financial report video." PC Watch also does not state he made the parody. lullabying (talk) 05:23, 5 August 2023 (UTC
- ALT1b: "... that in 2019, Chinese electronics company Xiaomi posted a video of their third quarterly financial report featuring a parody of the anime song "Renai Circulation"?" lullabying (talk) 05:31, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
I suppose that wording is better. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:17, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
- I don't know, that still doesn't seem to match what I saw in the sources. Maybe it should be the hook itself that needs revision. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 03:00, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
