User talk:Bonadea/Archive 8

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Thank you for your swift response regarding the Woodside School article.

I am new to Wikipedia although not new to article writing and it has taken, and is still taking, me hours to navigate my way around the confusion of directions - even writing this to you has used up an inordinate amount of time!

On reflection I can understand that you felt that my first efforts could be construed as being a possible 'conflict of interest' or 'promotional' and I spent the next few hours amending and deleting what I considered might be irrelevant or opinionated phraseology. I noted your own amendments which, understandably in the circumstances, seemed to make the piece less readable than before. Further major amendments and minor 'tweaks' were made by me but I see that you still insist that the 'Advertisement' banner should remain attached to the article. I find this disappointing as the only clear adjective which remains is 'imposing' as it relates to St Stephen's Church, but which seems to be doing little harm. The remainder is factual and indisputable. Unless, of course, you consider the 'Location' piece irrelevant in which case you don't know India like I do!

I included that working on the assumption that anyone reading the article may, just may, be interested enough to visit the site in which case directions would be helpful.

But your word is law, so let it be, or alternatively delete the site altogether - no one I know will be particularly offended by that. I would remind you that it was created in the first place by a student with factual and grammatical inaccuracies which seemed to have escaped anyone's notice.

And now I'm done - time and energy levels are exhausted for this project. Thank for your help, guidance and interest.

Nilgiris (talk) 03:34, 10 July 2010 (UTC)westbury