Draft:Corina Larpin

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• Comment: The overall tone is not neutral. There are multiple accolades about the brand when the article is supposed to be about the person. This makes it read like a promotional piece for an airline magazine, not an encyclopaedic article. You need to find some sources that are not promotional, and are about the person, and use them to create a more rounded balanced article. MarcGarver (talk) 08:41, 26 November 2024 (UTC)@MarcGarver, I do not agree with your point. This is a page about the designer and her work. Can you be more specific what sources are promotional? I added multiple non-promotional articles from Elle, Vogue, Forbes, Hola and many other biggest publication in the world. None of them have the mark promo. All of them provide in depth coverage of the work of the person. She is the creator of Stéfère Jewelry and section career is about her work, covered in media around the world.

Corina Mihaila Larpin is a Romanian-born jewelry designer and the founder of Stéfère Jewelry, a high-end brand known for its edgy designs.^[1] Based in Hong Kong, Larpin's work has been featured on red carpets worldwide, worn by celebrities such as Cardi B, Lady Gaga, and J Balvin. Her creations are characterized by bold, rock-inspired motifs, including snakes, stars, and skulls.^[2][3]