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Comment: As somebody who is minimally familiar with the literature behind this topic, there are multiple problems that need to be tackled:* As mentioned above, the tone of the article is completely wrong, this is not a research paper, this is not a persuasive document, the article should be written in the tone of summarizing existing literature on the topic, without convincing the user of anything specific. (if you want to use a existing article as reference Infostealer or Cross-site leaks (both articles that I have created) might be a good place to start)* I'm still not convinced that "cyber privacy" as a neologism actually exists in the world. Non of the sources cited here actually define cyber-privacy as being any different from internet privacy or Information privacy. At best, the sources convince me that this would be a redirect to Internet privacy which appear to be dealing with this exact topic.* I find it weird that this article manages to tackle this topic without ever referring to PoPETs, USENIX, IEEE SSP NDSS or ACM CCS which are considered to the best quality and most reliable conferences/sources in the areas of cybersecurity and privacy. A lot of the sources are instead memos, institute names, and what appear to be single mentions of the term which are not authoritative in the same way as a review paper in one of those conference would be.TLDR, I think this article needs to be completely rewritten to even stand a chance of being accepted in AFC. Sohom (talk) 05:42, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Multiple unsourced paragraphs. Entities and Contributors to Cyber Privacy, Critics of Cyber Privacy Advocacy, Key Components of Cyber Privacy, Challenges and Future Directions all need more sources. Cowboygilbert - (talk) ♥ 05:20, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: All sources are about components of 'cyber privacy', not the term itself. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs) 10:34, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
In short, cyber privacy refers to the protection of personal information and communication across both online and offline digital networks and devices, focusing on the unique privacy challenges of cyberspace.
More specifically, cyber privacy involves the protection of personal information, data, and communication within the interconnected digital environment of cyberspace, addressing privacy concerns related to the security of computer networks and the online and offline activities that depend on these networks. This concept is distinct from information privacy and digital privacy, which covers the broader spectrum of protecting data across all electronic devices and platforms but typically does not account for the decentralized nature of distributed ledger systems, the risk of data re-identification through cyber methods, and several other specific concerns unique to cyberspace. In contrast internet privacy specifically focuses on safeguarding information during online interactions and activities, excluding considerations for offline intranets and other non-internet connected systems (extranets).