Draft:Elbit Crossbow

Elbit Crossbow
Elbit Crossbow
Type	120mm Mortar
Production history
Manufacturer	Elbit Systems
Unit cost	est. 2-3 million USD
Produced	2024 (planned)
Specifications
Mass	2.2t
Crew	2 (mortar crew only)
Caliber	120mm
Barrels	1
Maximum firing range	10km
Feed system	automatic from a 28 round magazine

Submission declined on 9 September 2024 by S0091 (talk).

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Comment: Sources are press releases/based on the company says. S0091 (talk) 19:27, 9 September 2024 (UTC)

The Elbit Crossbow is an automatic 120 mm mortar mounted in a rotating turret for use on a mortar carrier armoured vehicle, developed by Israel's Elbit Systems. The mortar is expected to be ready for production in the second half of 2024.^[1]

^ "DSEI 2023 – Elbit Systems unveils Crossbow, its next generation 120 mm turreted mortar system". 14 September 2023.

[:0-1] "DSEI 2023 – Elbit Systems unveils Crossbow, its next generation 120 mm turreted mortar system". 14 September 2023.

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