Draft:Element Isle

Submission declined on 8 September 2024 by Ca (talk). Basing off independent sources, I don't think there is that much to be said about this company other than that they made few works for the royal family. I recommend adding mentions in related articles like Coronation of Charles III and Camilla and Jewels of Elizabeth II. If you would like to continue working on the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window. If you have not resolved the issues listed above, your draft will be declined again and potentially deleted. If you need extra help, please ask us a question at the AfC Help Desk or get live help from experienced editors. Please do not remove reviewer comments or this notice until the submission is accepted. Where to get help If you need help editing or submitting your draft, please ask us a question at the AfC Help Desk or get live help from experienced editors. These venues are only for help with editing and the submission process, not to get reviews. If you need feedback on your draft, or if the review is taking a lot of time, you can try asking for help on the talk page of a relevant WikiProject. Some WikiProjects are more active than others so a speedy reply is not guaranteed. How to improve a draft Wikipedia:Contributing to Wikipedia – a basic overview on how to edit Wikipedia. Help:Wikitext – how to use the markup Help:Referencing for beginners – how to include references Wikipedia:Article development – how to develop your article Wikipedia:Writing better articles – how to improve your article Wikipedia:Verifiability – make sure your article includes reliable third-party sources You can also browse Wikipedia:Featured articles and Wikipedia:Good articles to find examples of Wikipedia's best writing on topics similar to your proposed article. Improving your odds of a speedy review To improve your odds of a faster review, tag your draft with relevant WikiProject tags using the button below. This will let reviewers know a new draft has been submitted in their area of interest. For instance, if you wrote about a female astronomer, you would want to add the Biography, Astronomy, and Women scientists tags. Add tags to your draft Editor resources Easy tools: Citation bot (help) | Advanced: Fix bare URLs Declined by Ca 7 days ago. Last edited 0 seconds ago. Reviewer: Inform author. Once you save your changes using the "Publish changes" button below, you will be able to resubmit your draft for review by pressing the "Resubmit" button that will appear here.

Submission declined on 8 July 2024 by MarcGarver (talk). This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are: in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements) reliable secondary strictly independent of the subject Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia. Declined by MarcGarver 2 months ago.

• Comment: Previous feedback was to talk about the company more, and why it is notable. Maybe this has lead to a 'promotional tone'. I have tried to dial it back a bit based on your feedback. Thanks. CaptainTavish (talk) 18:25, 10 July 2024 (UTC)

• Comment: This is rather promotional in tone. Theroadislong (talk) 15:03, 10 July 2024 (UTC)

• Comment: Thank you for your feedback. The article has been revised to focus more on the company itself rather than just its notable works. Key changes include:
  Company Focus: Added a detailed history and background section, highlighting the founders' credentials and expertise.
  Direct References: Included references specifically about the company, such as their official website and an article from the UNESCO Biosphere Isle of Man.
  Community Engagement: Added a section on community involvement, detailing their fundraising efforts for local charities and support for the Oie Voaldyn Fire Festival. CaptainTavish (talk) 18:21, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

• Comment: The news stories are about the items made by the company, but don't really discuss the company at any length. Just being the manufacturer of a couple of gifts for a monarch doesn't seem sufficient to establish notability. That is, the company's notability can't be inherited from the notability of the items. You really need references that talk about the company itself in depth MarcGarver (talk) 15:46, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

Element Isle is a jewellery design company based in the Isle of Man, known for its original work inspired by the Isle of Man's natural beauty and cultural heritage.