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| Submission declined on 12 September 2024 by OlifanofmrTennant (talk). This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject. Declined by OlifanofmrTennant 59 days ago. | |
Comment: Needs alot of copy editing Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 17:49, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: The title of this draft either has been disambiguated or will need to be disambiguated for acceptance.If the title of this draft has been disambiguated, submitters and reviewers are asked to check the disambiguated title to see if it is the most useful disambiguation, and, if necessary, rename the draft. If this draft is accepted, the disambiguation page will need to be edited. Either an entry will need to be added, or an entry will need to be revised. Please do not edit the disambiguation unless you are accepting this draft.The disambiguation page for the primary name is Joseph McCarthy (disambiguation). Robert McClenon (talk) 06:14, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
Born: October 29, 1951, Madison, Wisconsin Died: August 19, 2000, Kenosha, Wisconsin Profession: Director of Transportation
Joseph McCarthy | Urban Transit (1951–2000) was an American transportation director known for his contributions to urban transit systems, particularly in Kenosha, Wisconsin. Born in Madison, Wisconsin, McCarthy was raised in Sun Prairie. His parents, John and Margaret McCarthy, worked in transportation, which likely influenced his future career in public transit.[1][2]