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Comment: Sentences like "artistic visionary known for her distinguished international career" are not neutral and are inadequately cited. In addition, the structure of the draft is like a resume or CV. Please review other biographies on Wikipedia for guidance on how to organise an article, thanks. MarcGarver (talk) 19:44, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
Judith Lynn Stillman is an American pianist, composer, filmmaker, and artistic visionary known for her distinguished international career and her commitment to using the arts as a voice for social justice[1]. She holds Bachelor's, Master's, and Doctoral degrees from The Juilliard School, where she won the Juilliard Concerto Competition and was awarded the prize for Outstanding Pianist upon graduation.