Draft:Lederer (brand)

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Submission declined on 9 September 2024 by DoubleGrazing (talk). This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies. Declined by DoubleGrazing 2 months ago.

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  The list page for the name is Lederer. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:31, 3 November 2024 (UTC)

• Comment: Please dial back the promotionality, your job is to describe the subject, not to 'sell' it. DoubleGrazing (talk) 10:52, 9 September 2024 (UTC)

Lederer is a Swiss luxury watch brand founded by a master of escapements Bernhard Lederer. The brand is known for its focus on horological innovation, particularly in the development of mechanical watches with unique escapements and movements, which are designed and manufactured in-house.