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Comment: Most of the sources used for the prose are not reliable (blogs) or not about the tour. See WP:NTOUR for the notability criteria which requires in-depth coverage about the tour, such critical reviews, etc. For the Newspaper.com sources, please include the title of the article (or even better, make a clipping so it is easily accessible. See WP:NEWSPAPERS.COM). S0091 (talk) 16:31, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: This draft has been resubmitted without any visible improvement, or with very little improvement. If you do not know what is needed to improve this draft, please ask for advice rather than making minor improvements and resubmitting. You may ask for advice on how to improve this draft at the Teahouse or on the talk pages of any of the declining reviewers. (The declining reviewers may advise you to ask for advice at the Teahouse.)If this draft is resubmitted without any improvement or with very little improvement again, it is likely to be rejected, and it may be nominated for deletion, or a topic-ban may even be requested against further submission by the responsible editor.This draft was previously declined because it lacks Reception information, and it still lacks Reception information. Robert McClenon (talk) 23:29, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: Fails WP:GNG, requires significant coverage (about the tour - not mentions in passing) in multiple independent secondary sources. Dan arndt (talk) 01:05, 10 September 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: This draft lacks Reception information, either ticket sales information or reviews by critics. Please expand and resubmit. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:13, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
| Tour by The Jackson 5 | |
| Location | North America |
|---|---|
| Associated albums | Third Album Maybe Tomorrow |
| Start date | January 2, 1971 |
| End date | October 15, 1971 |
| Legs | 4 |
| No. of shows | 68 |
| Supporting acts | Commodores Yvonne Fair |
| Attendance | 750,000+ |
| Box office | $2.5M+ |
| The Jackson 5 concert chronology | |
The Jackson 5 Second National Tour is the second concert tour of The Jackson 5. The tour launched to support the brothers' third and fifth studio albums Third Album and Maybe Tomorrow. The brothers toured throughout the United States, with one show taking place in Toronto, Canada. The tour started in Miami Beach on January 2, 1971, and ended in Chicago on October 15, 1971.