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| Submission declined on 4 September 2024 by Qcne (talk). This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources. Declined by Qcne 12 days ago. | |
| Submission declined on 1 September 2024 by Bonadea (talk). This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies. The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you. Declined by Bonadea 14 days ago. | |
| Submission declined on 1 September 2024 by Qcne (talk). The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you. Declined by Qcne 14 days ago. | |
| Submission declined on 1 September 2024 by Qcne (talk). The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you. Declined by Qcne 14 days ago. | |
| Submission declined on 1 September 2024 by Qcne (talk). The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you. Declined by Qcne 14 days ago. | |
Comment: Qcne's comment still stands. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 11:01, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
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- Comment: A number of references have been inserted, but they are not in fact sources and appear to have been added as a kind of "further reading" rather than as a verification of the information. For instance, the name Vikram Dasgupta does not need a source, but Dasgupta's own website has been added as a source there. The sentence "His 2020 feature documentary Beyond Moving followed the journey of Siphe November, a young South African ballet dancer, from his discovery in the township of Zolani to becoming the youngest principal dancer with the National Ballet of Canada" is not supported by the source national.ballet.ca, and so on.In addition, all the sources are bare URLs, and references must include some information about what they are – the link provided in the very first decline notice, to this referencing tutorial, explains that.Please address these issues before resubmitting the draft. bonadea contributions talk 12:24, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: If this is resubmitted again without any attempt to address the reviewer comments, it will probably be rejected with no option to resubmit. bonadea contributions talk 20:35, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: As I said previously we require in-line citations. This is mandatory. See WP:INTREFVE. Qcne (talk) 18:57, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Please see the referencing tutorial at WP:INTREFVE Qcne (talk) 16:16, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Vikram Dasgupta is an Indian-Canadian filmmaker recognized for his work in documentaries, short films, and commercials. Born in New Delhi, India, he comes from a family with a rich artistic heritage, including painters, scientists, and dancers and he cites his grandmother's storytelling as a significant influence on his creative development.[1]
- ^ Film, Freeway. "Writer/Producer/Director". filmfreeway.com.