Draft:Wildlife Wonders Apollo Bay

  • Comment: As said by the last reviewers, the submission sounds like an advertisement, I propose removing the biased words like "award-winning" and remove unnecessary sentences the reader wont read. TheNuggeteer (talk) 03:50, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Comment: Thank you for declaring your affiliation to the topic. Upon closer look, there are some issues that need addressed prior to resubmission. The first is hyperlinks. These need to be removed and turned into references if they are supporting content. Here is an example of one I did for you so you have something to work from. Another issue is promotional tone. There is an entire section on "social enterprise" referenced to the official website of the topic. This is likely something they want to see, but you need to ask yourself if this is something that Wikipedia readers would like to know. If the preserve is noted for this, then it is likely covered in numerous reliable secondary sources so please use them instead of the company website. If it is not something it is widely known for, I would suggest removing it. Finally, the references seem to discuss the topic, but not in great detail. They basically talk about it in context with another topic. Are there any references you can provide which show that the preserve is covered in-depth or the primary focus of the article? CNMall41 (talk) 04:42, 10 January 2024 (UTC)


Wildlife Wonders is a wildlife sanctuary in Apollo Bay on the Great Ocean Road in Victoria, Australia.

Its focus is on environmental conservation[1] and education. Wildlife Wonders is a social enterprise[2] supporting environmental conservation of the Otways region through the parent organisation, the Conservation Ecology Centre .

Wildlife Wonders, Apollo Bay
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Wildlife Wonders is 5kms outside of Apollo Bay on the Great Ocean Road in Victoria, Australia
  1. ^ "Australian Charities and Not for Profit Commission". 6 March 2024. Retrieved 6 March 2024.
  2. ^ Collopy, Kristoffer (2021-06-06). "Ethical Blog Series #6 - Lizzie Corke OAM & Wildlife Wonders". Ethical Kollektiv. Retrieved 2024-02-07.