Talk:Abbotsford Bridge

GA Review

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Reviewer: Fredddie (talk · contribs) 22:41, 15 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I will review the article shortly. –Fredddie 22:41, 15 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    The lead seems a little short. There is a long history section yet there is only one sentence of history in the lead.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Overall pretty good, but I think the lead needs to reflect the length of the history section. –Fredddie 01:23, 16 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

 Done - Has been expanded, if you think it requires further expansion let me know (and some pointers of what needs more focus) -- Nbound (talk) 04:38, 16 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

That's more like it. Passing now. –Fredddie 04:43, 16 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]