Talk:Annika Zeyen

Annika Zeyen has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: October 10, 2013. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Annika Zeyen appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 16 April 2013 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows: Did you know... that Annika Zeyen and Maria Kühn were both members of the wheelchair basketball team that was awarded Germany's highest sporting honour, the Silver Laurel Leaf? A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2013/April. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Annika Zeyen.

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:42, 7 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article sometime today. Wizardman 15:42, 7 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

• "She has also played the national team," played for the
  • Y Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• "was runner-up at 2010 World Championships" was the runner-up
  • Y Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• "Zeyen found ASV Bonn." starting off a paragraph like this feel like rather iffy writing. Can it be modified a bit? If nothing else at least changed found to joined.
  • Y Done Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• "which contained a number of former teammates and opponents from the University of Illinois." This implies to me that she went to Illinois, which I know is not the case since she went to Alabama. Can this be rewritten to avoid the confusion?
  • Y Ooops. Wrong state. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• "where majored in advertising" where she maintained.
  • N No, "majored" is correct. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• "Her team at the University Alabama" of Alabama
  • Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• "an game" a game
  • Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
• "Academic All American" All-American should be hyphenated.
  • Y Done. I still think it's kewl that you can be All-American without being American at all.
• Do a run-though of the article to double-check the English, just to make sure there were no remaining missing word issues I missed.
  • Y Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Article is now on hold, and I will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 02:00, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

• All points addressed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:02, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Everything looks good, so the article passes. Wizardman 03:55, 10 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]