Talk:Ashleigh Southern

	Ashleigh Southern was one of the Sports and recreation good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Article milestones Date Process Result April 24, 2012 Good article nominee Listed May 14, 2023 Good article reassessment Delisted
	A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on March 2, 2012. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Australian Stingers Ashleigh Southern, Glencora Ralph, Zoe Arancini, Rowena Webster and Nicola Zagame are five of seventeen water polo players trying to make the 2012 Summer Olympics squad?
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 03:44, 22 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:44, 22 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

• Courier Mail and FINA World Cup link to disambiguation pages; have them link to the right pages.
  • fixed. --LauraHale (talk) 04:58, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• "In water polo, she is a centre forward or outside shooter position" rm position, seems rather obvious that it is, and breaks up the flow a bit.
  • fixed. --LauraHale (talk) 04:58, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• As a whole, she is used a good 90% of the time. Throw in the occasional Southern just to give the prose a bit more variety; "she did x, she did y" makes it a bit more laboring to get through.
  • Fixed. --LauraHale (talk) 05:06, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• "2010.[9][22] that finished second.[1]" sentence fragment.
  • fixed. --LauraHale (talk) 04:58, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• "competed against Italy in the International Series with Italy " a bit redundant, the second with Italy can be removed.
  • fixed. --LauraHale (talk) 04:58, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• "She also scored a goal in the friendly " a friendly would sound a bit better here
  • fixed. --LauraHale (talk) 04:58, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
• "Australia won 13 – 5, " cut the spaces
  • fixed. --LauraHale (talk) 04:58, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Not too much to fix. I'll put the article on hold for five days. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 01:36, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 15:47, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]