Talk:Bayes Business School

I have changed the opening line, as suggested by Bensawtell below, to be more neutral as the reference was the school itself rather than an independent source and this article very much reads like an advert/prospectus rather than a wikipedia article. 9riffin (talk) 13:32, 19 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

There are two numbers for alumni in this page: 13,000 and 17,000. Which is it?Yoavf 11:31, 15 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Reads rather like a prospectus rather than an encyclopedia article88.104.96.117 (talk) 18:39, 11 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I agree. This has clearly been written by a marketing department. —Preceding unsigned comment added by El-Shabazz (talkcontribs) 11:41, 13 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]