Talk:California State Route 11

Good articleCalifornia State Route 11 has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 30, 2016Good article nomineeListed
March 11, 2024Good article reassessmentKept
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:55, 24 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Happy to review. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 17:55, 24 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Nice article. Here are my comments:

  • Lead
  • "plan" looks a bit too repeated in the first few lines.
  • Don't say currently, say something like as of 2016.
  • I think it should be clear from the first line itself that the route is under construction.
  • Route description
  • Maybe History should precede this section? That's the order I have seen in similar articles.
  • State Route 11 (SR 11) is a state route in San Diego County Please mention this part as well when you begin with the main article.
  • Reword currently as suggested above.
  • History:
  • The entire road could be complete by 2017 You mean "is expected to be complete by"? I think this fact is important enough to be mentioned in the lead.
  • Are all points in the table sourced?

That should be it. I will return this weekend. I would be happy to promote this once the above points are addressed. Cheers, Sainsf <^>Feel at home 12:06, 27 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Sainsf: all done. --Rschen7754 04:08, 29 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Rschen7754. I see no more issues with the article, really good work. This is promoted. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 03:56, 30 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]