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B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
The song received remixes by Thurston Moore on June 2[19] and Bear in Heaven on June 9." – I feel like "The song was remixed by..." would be a better start. I also think that we should give a little context on who Thurston Moore and Bear in Heaven are...that's my preference, though.
"received remixes" is better because of the release dates; i.e. Moore didn't remix the song on June 2, it was just released then. Added context
"In 2014, Pitchfork named it the 89th best track of the decade until then" – could there be a clarification for when "until then" was? It seems to also repeat later on too.
Done
"Eric Torres wrote to Pitchfork" – does Torres work for Pitchfork, or did he just write to Pitchfork? Just a query.
Works for Pitchfork. I wrote it like that just to have some variation in how to introduce different writers.
Another query: is the black image supposed to be the track cover? I can't seem to find it on the streaming services (it might be due in part of my school's web-blocking filters).
Yes, on streaming services the cover is a black square.
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