Talk:Cleveland Bay

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Article milestones Date Process Result August 28, 2009 Good article nominee Listed November 24, 2009 Peer review Reviewed December 19, 2009 Featured article candidate Promoted
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Righto, I will make some straightforward prose changes as I go (please revert anywhere I inadvertently change the meaning), and note queries below. Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:04, 28 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

• I'd clarify it was Cleveland in England in the lede - I kept thinking of Cleveland, Ohio....

• and has experienced ups and downs in popularity in that country - hmmm, doesn't sound encyclopedic, I'd try something like "The popularity of the Cleveland Bay has greatly fluctuated since it was first imported to the United States in the early 1800s"

In summary, neither of these are deal-breakers though. So it passes GA standards :) Casliber (talk · contribs) 20:48, 28 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Wow, thank you very much for the fast review and the pass! I'll fix these two things in the next few days - RL just dumped on me, and I've been working lots of hot, dirty, profitable overtime :) Thanks again! Dana boomer (talk) 22:45, 28 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]