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"When Men try to go there" – wikilink Men in Middle-earth.
Done.
"including the world, Arda and its central continent," – I believe it should be "including the world, Arda, and its central continent,"?
Done.
Could the quote box be cited?
Done.
"The race of the Dwarves" – wikilink Dwarves in Middle-earth.
Done.
"These were co-actors" – is there a better word choice available than "co-actors"?
Reworded.
Wikilink Christopher Tolkien and unlink his mention in § Planets and constellations.
Done.
"during the Music of the Ainur" – this should not be wikilinked as it redirects to Ainulindalë which has already been wikilinked.
Done.
"give them immortality." – I think it makes sense to wikilink immortality here.
Done.
"are destined to "fade" much more rapidly," – recommend "are destined to "fade" more rapidly,"
Done.
"may ultimately go to Heaven" – could Heaven in Middle-earth be expanded upon?
This is Shippey's thought; Tolkien does not expand upon it (beyond saying the Elves don't know about it).
"though this is left vague in the Legendarium." – does "Legendarium" have to be capitalised?
No.
"So, Shippey asks, did Elves have souls? Since they could not leave the world, the answer seems to be no; but given that they didn't disappear completely on death, the answer had to have been yes." – is quite unencyclopaedic. Rephrase.
Reworded.
"as various scholars have commented" – are there too many to name individually?
Multiple scholars have said very similar things; listing their names won't help the average reader, and for the rare one who needs to know, the citations are right there.
Does "Elves ("functionally immortal")" need to be cited individually? Ref 7 is already cited in Hierarchy of beings.
Well, if the rule is "we always cite direct quotations" then yes. And it'd be unsafe to remove the quotation marks.
"Roman Catholicism, and that of Medieval poetry" – wikilink Roman Catholicism as first mention in the lead.
Done.
"that Good and Evil are equally powerful" – are these capitalisations correct?
Let's try it without.
"Avakúma is not to be confused with the state of non-being that preceded the creation of Eä." – Avakúma? This is its only mention.
Avoided.
I doubt that "Ages of the Stars" and "Great Stars" need to be boldfaced.
Fixed.
"Tolkien created Sindarin names for the other" – wikilink Sindarin.
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