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Review: August 30, 2024. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

Passed. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 04:13, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Dizzy (Olly Alexander song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Nascar9919 (talk · contribs) 00:37, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: TheNuggeteer (talk · contribs) 14:13, 14 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing this article like I did in Europapa, thanks! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 14:13, 14 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TheNuggeteer: Pinging as a checkup. It's been over a week since any progress has been made. Are you still able to do this review? Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 02:56, 24 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review the article. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 11:36, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Everything okay! Going to initiate the second wave. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 04:13, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

First wave

Lead

Nothing wrong with the lead, good job! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:05, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Background and composition

It seems like there are a lot of things in source 10 to add to the article. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:05, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Added some things. Let me know if you want anything else.

Music video and promotion

You could also add source 14 for "Graham Meets Olly".

Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 23:54, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Source 18 does not mention the deconstructed house and the rooftop.

Fixed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 23:54, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I suggest you add Release to the section and also make Promotion its own section. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:05, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 23:54, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Second wave

Critical reception

There are multiple reviews in source 32, you can include them.

Not done. Already included with their separate sources. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Why is source 4 put as "subscription needed" when it's easily accessible?

Removed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You could also add a tune that doesn’t so much spin you right round as sit you down and bore you to tears from source 31. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 04:40, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Eurovision Song Contest (up to At Eurovision, 1st paragraph)

Source 41 also mentions the people who led the search, you can add it.

Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The source does not mention that the series was the 21st.

Removed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You can add the contents of the letter in source 45. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 04:40, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 04:18, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Everything looks good, will review the rest (Third wave) later. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 04:41, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Third wave

At Eurovision (rest)

There's more information about the staging in source 51, you can include that. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not particularly sure what you want me to add? It seems like it's detailed enough already; I could be wrong, though. What would you honestly want added?

Credits and personnel

Everything's okay here. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Track listing

Can't see a source for the length of the extended version and the spinner. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Extended version shows up on my end. As for the spinner, removed. Nothing seems to show the times for the spinner. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 16:28, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Charts and release history

Going to assume they're okay. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Other comments

Something's wrong with ref 5. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:50, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 16:28, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@TheNuggeteer: Done with my edits. Look good to you? Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 16:54, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Everything's done, passing the article. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 04:13, 30 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.