Ernie Pike was nominated as a Language and literature good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (September 13, 2024, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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Nominator: Cambalachero (talk · contribs) 19:01, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: TheNuggeteer (talk · contribs) 08:31, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
Going to review this later! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
08:31, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
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04:30, 13 September 2024 (UTC)Hi, I would strongly recommend TheNuggeteer closes this review as a fail. The writing is very wordy, there is a lot of confusion as to what the subject of the article even is (character or comic series), and it creates problems with understanding the scope of the comic series. Numerous unsourced statements. I haven't evaluated whether other sources exist, TheNuggeteer mentions that they have seen numerous unused sources which would likely indicate a failure to be broad in coverage (WP:GACR #3. I've left some comments below. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 03:10, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
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03:49, 13 September 2024 (UTC)A lot of the words are unsourced.
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04:21, 10 September 2024 (UTC)🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
04:21, 10 September 2024 (UTC)🍗TheNuggeteer🍗
04:21, 10 September 2024 (UTC)Such stories do not narrate real battles or exploits of noteworthy military people, being instead tragic stories of unknown soldiers, made up by the author.This first bit is redundant if you are going to say they are fictionalised. There should not be a comma between soldiers and "made up" in that case.
Oesterheld worked again with the characterthis reads as euphemistic
during thetime of theVietnam War,
used itused him
The name of the protagonist was reminiscent of that of Ernie Pylea lot more concise
a well knownbe more precise than "of the era": what is the context?real lifewar correspondent of the era
UnlikeErniePyle
into the creation of-> to create
Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 03:10, 13 September 2024 (UTC)