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Short description: 2014 video game
Ether One was a Video games good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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The lead is too short. It need to be significantly expanded per WP:LEADLENGTH
The lead has one citation for uncontroversial information. Move it somewhere else per WP:LEADCITE
That is a well-written little plot section. Well done
The gameplay section is under-developed. It needs to be significantly expanded. Information like what kind of puzzles players would encounter, what game mechanics are there, how players interact with the world, should be there. After reading it, I still know nothing about the game's gameplay.
The gameplay screenshot is placed in a wrong position
You should paraphrase and reword the quote from Pete Bottomley.
What about other game design? How puzzles were developed, why they choose the topic "dementia". What about the game's soundtrack? When the development of this game began?
The game was released both digitally and on Blu-ray Disc. - One-sentence paragraph is not encouraged
Ether One has received largely positive reviews from critics. - Not really "largely" positive reviews
S. Prell of Joystiq praised the environment, writing that the uninhabited dreamscapes feel "almost haunted; there is a constant, pervasive feeling that something is not right here". - What is S. Prell's first name?
It is not IGN and or PC Gamer that thought the game was something. It is the reviewers that said these things.
Good to see someone working on this interesting independent game. While the article is well-written, it is too basic, and does not cover the game in a comprehensive way. The over-simplistic gameplay and development section, as well as the excessive use of quotes in the article prevented it from promoting to a good article. It is getting there, it only needs more expansion. AdrianGamer (talk) 05:44, 19 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@AdrianGamer: I've taken a look at your points and I've also added some more info. It's not completely up-to-par; I'm still working on the lead and gameplay sections, but I just thought I'd give you an update. StewdioMACK (talk) 02:25, 21 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Since there is no activity on this page, and the nominator did not reply, I am closing this review now. Feel free to re-nominate the article when you have fixed all the issues, and I will be happy to review it again.