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Hello, I'll be doing the review of the article. Since I haven't done one in a while it might take some time but I'm pretty sure it will pass. Cheers.Tintor2 (talk) 15:02, 4 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Judgesurreal777: First things first. I find this article in good shape but there are few issues that need to be solved:
Per WP:Lead, an introduction to the reception section could be added to the second paragraph or simply a third paragraph.
Can "Premise and gameplay" be expanded? I haven't played the VR but it seems like quite small based on the description. Maybe adding a description would help. to add more coverage similar to what we did with G-Bike where we even could add gameplay image and illustrate it.
I already added Tabata's image.
The prerelease section seems a bit simple with quotes and the idea of "x said this, y said that". Try rearranging it a bit like the the postrelease in. Try finding a point in common like a subject or just positive and negative.
Other than that, I might give the article another look but I think it's in good shape. The references seem to be reliable.Tintor2 (talk) 15:46, 4 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]