Talk:Morane-Borel military monoplane

Morane-Borel military monoplane has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: November 17, 2022. (Reviewed version).

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A fact from Morane-Borel military monoplane appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 10 December 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows: Did you know... that the Morane-Borel military monoplane participated in the Reims Military Aviation Competition, where it lost? A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2022/December. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Morane-Borel military monoplane.

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:41, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I will take a look at this one shortly. Zawed (talk) 08:41, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

It took longer than expected to come back to this one, but now here. There's not much to this article though:

Lead

• Mention Etablissements Borel as manufacturer with a pipelink as Morane-Borel

Design

• The military monoplane was derived from the company's: suggest "The military monoplane was derived from Morane-Borel's..."
• There is a disambig tag on undercarriage
• Maybe break into two paragraphs at the point Lateral control...

History

• French Army decided to sponsor a competitive event to be held at Reims in October. Add the link to the competition.
  • Linked in the lede.
• The company leadership... suggest writing the name of the company here as well.

Specifications

• Nothing is listed under the "Performance" heading?
  • No performance data has survived.

Other stuff

• Image tag OK
• Best I can figure from Google translate, the Hartmann ref supports what is cited to it. AGF on the others
• Disambig tag on undercarriage as noted above

That's it for me, placing on hold. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 04:24, 6 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry to take so long to respond. See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:29, 10 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

OK, passing as GA. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:46, 17 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]