Talk:Parsurameswara Temple

Parsurameswara Temple has been listed as one of the Art and architecture good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: July 23, 2014. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Parsurameswara Temple appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 9 August 2014 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows: Did you know... that the Parsurameswar Temple (pictured) in Bhubaneswar is believed to be around 1400 years old? A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2014/August.

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Reviewer: Hamiltonstone (talk · contribs) 13:01, 22 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Generally excellent article. It is neutral, stable, and fairly comprehensive. Images are appropriately licenced. I have copyedited it where i was clear about the intended meaning. Other points:

• At one point we have "the sanctum, called vimana," and at another "The sanctum (garbhagriha)". It can't be both - something needs fixing.

I have removed garbhagriha to make it consistent.

• "the walls are mottled by portions" - what?? Neither the use of "mottled" nor "portions" makes sense here. Can someone check this out?

rephrased

• Final section has "...prove the existence of Natyasastra tradition during the times." There need to be at least a few words explaining what this tradition is - a wikilink is not sufficient. Also specify during which times.

Good point - I had a wrong denotion here - it was Devadasi tradition, whose existence is insisted. I have rephrased the section.

I think that's it. hamiltonstone (talk) 13:01, 22 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot for taking up the review. Let me fix the items quoted.Ssriram mt (talk) 16:09, 22 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Please let me know for further comments.Ssriram mt (talk) 17:35, 22 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I think that's it. Thank you for the prompt responses. hamiltonstone (talk) 01:13, 23 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]